A New Collection Review: Interconnected Stories of Pain

Twelve-year-old Freya stays with her preoccupied mother in Cornwall when she encounters teenage twins. "The only thing better than being aware of a secret," they advise her, "is having one of your own." In the days that ensue, they sexually assault her, then entomb her breathing, blend of anxiety and annoyance flitting across their faces as they eventually liberate her from her makeshift coffin.

This might have stood as the shocking focal point of a novel, but it's merely a single of multiple awful events in The Elements, which assembles four novelettes – released separately between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters negotiate past trauma and try to find peace in the present moment.

Disputed Context and Thematic Exploration

The book's release has been clouded by the presence of Earth, the subsequent novella, on the longlist for a significant LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, the majority other nominees dropped out in objection at the author's gender-critical views – and this year's prize has now been cancelled.

Debate of LGBTQ+ matters is absent from The Elements, although the author touches on plenty of major issues. LGBTQ+ discrimination, the impact of traditional and social media, parental neglect and sexual violence are all examined.

Four Accounts of Pain

  • In Water, a mourning woman named Willow transfers to a secluded Irish island after her husband is imprisoned for awful crimes.
  • In Earth, Evan is a soccer player on court case as an participant to rape.
  • In Fire, the mature Freya manages vengeance with her work as a medical professional.
  • In Air, a dad flies to a burial with his young son, and wonders how much to disclose about his family's past.
Pain is piled on trauma as damaged survivors seem doomed to bump into each other repeatedly for eternity

Related Stories

Relationships multiply. We originally see Evan as a boy trying to escape the island of Water. His trial's jury contains the Freya who returns in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, partners with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Supporting characters from one story return in cottages, bars or courtrooms in another.

These plot threads may sound tangled, but the author is skilled at how to drive a narrative – his earlier acclaimed Holocaust drama has sold numerous units, and he has been rendered into many languages. His direct prose shines with gripping hooks: "ultimately, a doctor in the burns unit should be wiser than to toy with fire"; "the primary step I do when I come to the island is modify my name".

Personality Development and Storytelling Strength

Characters are portrayed in succinct, powerful lines: the compassionate Nigerian priest, the troubled pub landlord, the daughter at struggle with her mother. Some scenes echo with melancholy power or insightful humour: a boy is hit by his father after urinating at a football match; a biased island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour exchange jabs over cups of diluted tea.

The author's ability of carrying you fully into each narrative gives the reappearance of a character or plot strand from an previous story a authentic frisson, for the initial several times at least. Yet the aggregate effect of it all is desensitizing, and at times practically comic: pain is piled on suffering, coincidence on accident in a dark farce in which hurt survivors seem destined to meet each other continuously for eternity.

Conceptual Complexity and Concluding Evaluation

If this sounds less like life and more like purgatory, that is part of the author's point. These damaged people are burdened by the crimes they have experienced, trapped in cycles of thought and behavior that agitate and plunge and may in turn harm others. The author has talked about the effect of his personal experiences of harm and he describes with sympathy the way his characters traverse this perilous landscape, reaching out for treatments – solitude, frigid water immersion, reconciliation or invigorating honesty – that might bring illumination.

The book's "elemental" concept isn't terribly informative, while the brisk pace means the exploration of gender dynamics or online networks is mostly superficial. But while The Elements is a imperfect work, it's also a thoroughly accessible, trauma-oriented chronicle: a appreciated rebuttal to the usual fixation on authorities and offenders. The author demonstrates how trauma can run through lives and generations, and how duration and tenderness can soften its echoes.

Zachary Cruz
Zachary Cruz

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